Thursday, 12 April 2012

Agent's feedback

I've received feedback for the entire manuscript from one of the agents. Yay! She didn't think it right for her. Boo! But she loved the language and world-building - double yay, considering I'm writing in my second language.

The plot is too slow, not suspenseful enough, too many characters. These are all valid points, I guess. I'm still waiting for four more feedbacks - two beta readers, one paid editor and PW's review for ABNA. I expect them to be on similar topics, really. By the end of this month I should have a lot to think about for the next redraft.

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I'm slightly losing track of my rejections. One from Marsh Agency, one more from Marjacq.

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